My holidays in Rome

Hi Carla,
I and my friends are going to Rome tomorrow. We are going to Rome in plane. First, we are going to the Coliseum. There, we are going see an amphitheater that was used for nearly 500 years. Then, we are going to see La Fontana di Trevi.

After, we are going to walk by Rome several hours. Finally, we are going to having dinner and we are going to see Rome to night. I have looking forward to tomorrow!

xxx
Ana.

1 comments:

Marga Alfonso said...

Hi, Ana!
Just a few corrections:
- My friends and I...
- ...BY plane.
We are going TO see...
- walk along / walk the streets FOR several hours
- Rome AT night
- I AM looking forward...

But, all in all, it's good work!

See you,
Marga